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Read an extract from Demon Trappers

All of us at MKB are super excited about our January Book of the Month - The Demon Trappers: Forsaken. This is edgy, gripping and most importantly - it FINALLY shows that girl heroines can be feisty and hold their own (eat your heart out Bella!). Here's author Jana Oliver's favourite passage.

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It took the better part of an hour of skulking around the parking garage to finally locate the fiend in question. As they’d hiked through the multistory concrete structure, Beck remained on guard the entire time. It felt weird trapping with him but she had to admit she wasn’t afraid.

He can handle anything. Her dad had taught him well. ‘Not quite what ya thought trappin’ would be?’ Beck asked. It sounded like Harper’s question, except there was no malice in it.

‘I figured it’d be more exciting. Less hiking, for one.’ She’d managed to keep up with Beck, but it had been a struggle with her sore thigh. ‘I’ve never seen a Pyro.’

‘Evil critters. They love fire. It fascinates ’em.’

‘Like Fireman Jack.’

‘Yeah, ’cept he doesn’t go around settin’ ’em.’ Beck did a quick one-eighty, surveying the area around them. ‘It won’t be out in the open on the top deck, so this floor has to be it.’

‘Glad to hear it. All this incline stuff isn’t feeling good on the leg.’

He shook his head like he’d been stupid. ‘I’m sorry, girl. I didn’t think of that. Ya wanna wait in the truck?’

Did he just apologize? That had to be a first.

‘I’m good,’ she said, ignoring the jittery muscles and the cramping as best she could.

Beck scrutinized the area with wary anticipation. ‘Ya need to stay behind me. If this goes wrong, run,’ he ordered.

‘Wrong how?’

‘Like if this thing gets a couple cars burnin’.’

Exploding gas tanks. Not good.

‘Hold this, will ya?’ He handed over his duffel bag. It was so heavy she nearly dropped it.

‘Careful! There’s spheres in there.’

‘You could have warned me it weighs more than I do,’ she groused.

‘Ya need to build yourself up, girl. Only way to a full trapper’s bag.’

Muscles. Right. Just what I need. ‘Why don’t you pack lighter?’ she asked.

‘Ya need all the gear with ya.’

‘Why? You know this is a Two.’

‘Higher level demons can act like the lesser grades. Ya think you’re trappin’ a Three and it turns out to be a Four and if ya don’t have the right equipment that’s a LLM.’

‘Huh?’

‘Life. Limiting. Mistake.’ He stripped off his leather jacket and tossed it on a nearby car. He was wearing a Take No Prisoners camo T-shirt underneath. It was looser than most guys would wear.

He wasn’t looking to show off his muscles, but making sure he had plenty of room to move. Picking up a white sphere, Beck began his search. Luckily there weren’t as many cars as on the floors below. A sparking noise came from underneath an old SUV. It was one of the big monsters, the kind that no one would buy any more what with gas running ten or more a gallon. It was originally black, but now it was covered in a fine layer of dust as if it’d been abandoned here.

Something red, like a giant rubber band snaked out of the tailpipe.

As it reached the concrete floor, it took shape. It looked alot like an eight-inch-tall red rubber doll with horns and a forked tail. It grinned a mouthful of sharp teeth, then snapped its fingers. Brilliant red-gold fire shot out of its palms.

‘Trapper,’ it hissed.

‘Howdy, demon. Nice flames,’ Beck replied.

A second later a bolt of fire went streaking towards him like it had come from a military flame thrower. He deftly stepped aside and the bolt exploded on the concrete next to him. It’d happened so fast Riley hadn’t had time to react. If Beck was frightened, he certainly wasn’t showing it.

‘Roast you, trapper!’ the fiend hissed, snapping its fingers again. Then it caught sight of Riley.

Before her companion could shout a warning, a bolt came straight at her. She shrieked and cowered as the flames raced over the top of her. There was a sizzling sound as they struck a concrete support. The scorch mark was four feet wide.

Holy crap. Now she was scared.

The next fireball went straight at Beck. He weaved, lost his footing on a patch of oil and fell to one knee. The sphere in his right hand shattered and magically charged water burst forth in a rolling wave across the floor. In a few seconds ice crystals sheeted across the concrete like frost on a window pane in deep winter. Beck struggled to his feet and quickly backed off to avoid being trapped in the rapidly freezing pond.

‘I need another one!’ he called out.

With a high-pitched cackle, the fiend hopped on to a nearby Honda and began to fire incendiaries at the unarmed trapper.

‘Throw a sphere!’ Beck shouted, dodging and ducking to avoid the flames.

Riley pulled one out without looking, about to dash it to the ground.

‘Not that one!’ Beck cried out as an arc of flame caught him. ‘Get a white one!’

White. She put the duffel bag on the ground and frantically rummaged through the contents. Beck cried out as another bout of flame got too close. The cackling fiend was playing with him.

‘White!’ she shouted. ‘Got it.’ She hauled back to dash it on the floor of the garage.

‘Up! Throw the thing up!’ Beck called out and then rolled between two cars to avoid another burst of flame.

‘Up?’ She took a huge breath and underhanded the glass ball straight up towards the concrete above them.

The demon turned towards her, igniting a massive fireball on its palm.

‘Oh, God.’

The sphere struck the garage ceiling an instant before the demon set the fireball loose. Beck yelled something, but by then it was too late.

Pure white light slammed into her eyes, blinding her.

Stumbling backwards, she crashed into a support and landed hard.

Beck shouted again. The demon shrieked.

Then it began to snow.

 


2000chick
2000chick posted a comment
Thursday 23rd Dec 2010 07:03
for what i have read its sound amazing.
 
Brodie
Brodie posted a comment
Tuesday 28th Dec 2010 09:55
I can't wait to get my hands on a copy of this! The plot alone sounds amazing, the cover art is gorgeous, then you throw an awesome excerpt at us to entice, torture and make us want the book that much more! Overload, MKB, overload. Nonetheless, thanks for posting! :)
 
Agne
Agne posted a comment
Tuesday 28th Dec 2010 04:35
The first thing that I saw after opening the book made me want to read the book more. 2018. This was the year, when the book was centered. Does that mean the demons are normal after just few years of what we have now? The book was surprisingly fast paced and hardly predictable. It was something I enjoyed reading without a thought to change the book. On the other hand it was not totally unique because some books do have similar elements like in this story. But the author has tried very hard to make this unique and I loved the italic font scattered around the book which made this book at times funny and at times sad. After reading I feel as if I was on a big adventure and this book will be nothing compared to the next as the trouble has only started. Rating-8/10. The demon trappers, forsaken - Something, many people would love.
 
Agne
Agne replied
Tuesday 28th Dec 2010 04:37
I have started a book review blog for teenagers of similar books.. http://teenbooks-4-u.blogspot.com/
 
xmeesx
xmeesx posted a comment
Tuesday 28th Dec 2010 05:16
You must buy this book! The plot is so gripping you will most definitely want more! Jana Oliver has created Riley so that teenage girls can relate to her. In parts of the book we read about her past which is effective in how we can learn more about this character. This book will make you laugh and cry...you'll be on the edge of your seat! Jana Oliver writing technique is perfect! The layout of her book is what helps to make it more gripping. A totally exquisite story of love, action and kicking some butt!
 
xmeesx
xmeesx posted a comment
Tuesday 28th Dec 2010 05:16
I've also started a book review blog! :D Mine is http://miasbookreview.blogspot.com/2010/12/review-of-demon-trappers-forsaken.html Thank you. :)
 
Georgiex
Georgiex posted a comment
Wednesday 29th Dec 2010 11:49
Jana Oliver has you sitting on the edge of your seat from the very beginning with this exciting action plot. The book portrays a young girl’s view of the world and also a sense of loss and grieving. Riley is forced to grow up too fast when she is orphaned, leaving her to pay for the bills, bring in the monthly income and to top it all off fight the demons that are out to get her. During the book she is also challenged by the fact she is the only girl in an all male trapping pack, but Jana has created an independent and strong character that won’t let anything stand in her way. In this book Jana offers the perfect mix of love, loss and supernatural that leaves you wanting more.
 
jellytots281
jellytots281 posted a comment
Wednesday 29th Dec 2010 03:21
Within the first few words of this book your hooked. Set in 2018, this seems a whole world away from reality. I love the way the author has though outside of the box with this story; instead of vampires, demons. Instead of the present time, the future. This book is rather unique. The book is centred around Riley Blackthorne, a teenager trying to follow in her fathers footsteps. This book is really great, and just when you thought it couldn't get better, the author goes and does it again. A great, fast moving read that you can't put down until the very last word.
 
naomi4ever
naomi4ever posted a comment
Thursday 6th Jan 2011 07:59
I really enjoyed Forsaken. Although not the type of book that I would usually read, it was really gripping, and I do admit that I did cry at one or two points! This is the first in Jana Oliver’s Demon Trappers series, and after reading it I will definitely read the sequel! It is set in Atlanta, where Jana Oliver actually lives, in 2018. The beginning gives you a great introduction into Riley’s world, and introduces Beck, another main character, very well too. Riley is a Demon Trapper, who is paid for every demon she catches. One thing I love about the book is Riley’s courage and the fact that she is the first female demon trapper, and how she faces the unfairness and bias towards the male apprentices, and yet still works hard, possibly the hardest, to achieve her goals. At times she works alongside Simon, who is sweet and kind. He is pretty much every girl’s dream guy! But you do start to wonder if maybe Beck will become more than an overprotective brother figure… Riley is a fantastic character. She’s brave, loyal and courageous, and as mentioned before, she is strong, physically and mentally. But because she’s not a ‘Jane Doe’, her flaws make her enjoyable to read. To sum up, it’s a great book, with good characters and a strong plot. I would definitely recommend giving it a go, even if it’s not your usual type! I think this book is best for teenagers between 12 and 18, both genders. Enjoy!
 
TylerRosexD
TylerRosexD posted a comment
Thursday 6th Jan 2011 07:59
Enjoyed this book so much, and my review can be found at: http://mkbbookreviewstyler.blogspot.com/2011/01/mkb-review-demon-trappers-forsaken-by.html Amazing book, buy it! x
 
Alicia
Alicia posted a comment
Thursday 20th Jan 2011 05:04
Forsaken centres on the life of Riley Blackthorne, a seventeen year old ‘demon trapper’ apprentice whose rather unusual and exceedingly dangerous job involves trapping demons, of which are ranked down from a relatively harmless Grade 1 right up to the devilishly dangerous Grade 5 archfiends, and selling them on. She hopes to someday become a master trapper like her father, but that means working her way through the ranks and as the only female in an all-male world, that will not be easy. I was rather eager to begin reading this book as it sounded very intriguing and I have to say it certainly did not disappoint – the story grips you from the first few chapters, though it is a little slow at first, and is really action-packed, not to mention touching, fast-paced and believable – it has everything you could hope for in a book! Riley is a really spunky, kick-ass and likable character who is very well written and Beck & Simon were equally brilliant, though I found Beck more likeable and Simon just a little bit creepy. As well as good parts to every story, there are also bad parts; but I’m genuinely struggling to think of a single bad part (although quite a few things were unexplained) to this fab novel which is one of the most unique and brilliant books I have read this past year. I especially love the seamless inclusion of the demons as though they were an everyday nuisance; though I found it a teensy-bit confusing as to how or why demons infiltrated the earth, but I’m sure that will be explained in the coming books. All in all I absolutely recommend this book and cannot wait to read the forthcoming books in the trilogy, which has incredible promise.
 
ams
ams posted a comment
Sunday 23rd Jan 2011 10:40
looks good
 
KeikaAlexia
KeikaAlexia posted a comment
Tuesday 25th Jan 2011 06:23
What I think: At first I found the book kind of hard to really get into. I thought it might be another Twilight wannabe about a good-looking mythical boy and an ordinary girl, but it is so much better than Twilight and about a hundred times better than all those other Twilight wannabes. The great thing about Demon Trappers is that Riley have the whole "I need somebody to save me" attitude, because she is able to watch out for herself. When I was reading the book I also started to fell a little bit depressed for Riley because whenever anything got good for her, something spectacularly bad comes along and ruins it. I guess this is what helps make it such compulsive reading; you want find out if the protagonist comes out better after the hardship. Also just for good measure, the book has some interesting and handsome boy characters to keep you interested, so even a reluctant reader would read this ( and then the reluctant reader would find out how incredibly awesome the book is and would read the book to the very end. Sneaky ;). All in all a very good book with something for everyone and a storyline that will keep you interested and wanting more.
 
Aly
Aly posted a comment
Friday 28th Jan 2011 03:57
Riley Hunter is the daughter of Legend Demon Trapper Paul Blackthorne who is well respected and known among his kind. In a profession that is surrounded by men it can be tough for a girl like Riley to fit in. She has always felt like an outcast and alone, with no mother or any girl friends the one person she can depend on is Peter but even that friendship being long term isn't guaranteed. I was originally only planning on reading up to page 20 when I started it last night; only before I knew it I was on page 130 and devoured it as soon as I came back from college! It is a fantastic fast read I can seriously assure you that. When you have a book such as this that just clicks and flows so well it makes you question why you struggle with a book when it is obviously just not doing it for you. I really liked Riley, she was headstrong and courageous not to mention tough but constantly on the defensive because I felt she was afraid of getting hurt. There is no denying the love and respect she has for her father. They are not living in the best of conditions at the moment, with an enormous sum of Medical Bills to pay due to her mother’s illness, even after her death they are financially struggling. It's upon an encounter in a library where Riley is Demon Trapping that she and many start to realise that the Demons may have just taken a new route. Rather than go it alone as they are known for the Demons are trying new tactics. They are coming in packs and that means big big trouble! From not being taken seriously and even mocked by her fathers peers, they now have no choice but to momentarily give her a chance, with that comes the realisation that perhaps this young girl has what it truly takes to be one of them, despite being stereotyped because of her gender Riley with time learns that regardless of it being unfair she will have to prove herself and gain respect if she wants to stand a chance in being a Demon Trapper like her father. What others fail to realise is that maybe Riley has more than what it takes. The book includes some pretty cool concepts. You have the Necromancers who bring back the dead and use them as slaves which are then called the "Deaders" *I couldn't help but grin when I first heard that*: D Let me just say this girl has one thrilling adventure, one that I would never like to be a part of, thank you very much! The synopsis describes three boys, now when I read it I knew who I was eager to meet and that was Ori!! He just sounded gorgeous! I have to admit that I couldn't hide my disappointment when I realised that he wasn't going to be introduced until much later in the book. Simon is the good, sweet natured boy that we tend to have in a book on an average and an apprentice to Harper who in Riley's case is someone she should stay well away from. Then there is Beck, he is mature beyond his years and has had to grow up the hard way, broody but determined, he comes across as sensitive and vulnerable at the rarest of times and can even be described as having low self-esteem, of course he would never let anyone know of it. As a reader you have a better insight of such things and in his case I found it very endearing. He is probably my favourite character apart from Riley, I also got the vibe that he tended to put up this front as this tough, mean guy so that people couldn’t grasp the real him which is why Riley clashed so much with him. I loved that he obviously really cared for her and her father who he has the utmost regard for and because of this he is constantly at war with his feelings towards Riley and sadly has to watch as she becomes closer to others because of it. He pushes her away and is harsh but his intentions regardless of her not knowing are always good. The two are constantly bickering and slamming doors whenever they come head to head and as Beck starts to put his foot down and become more protective, Riley not noticing or not wanting to notice starts to resent him. They share a rocky relationship but you can see that beneath it all they genuinely care for each other. Meanwhile Ori is someone that I am definitely looking forward to getting to know better, he tends to have this habit at arriving at random moments to save the day and seems to have this mysterious thing going for him which is quite attractive. The Demon Trappers is definitely kick ass! It's not really one of those that keeps me on my toes despite it being very action packed or in particular make me feel connected to the characters, but that didn't really bother me. I don't think you need to feel connected to the characters in this case in order to enjoy the novel because it is full on entertainment in itself. I warmed to Riley and Beck and I think that truthfully was enough for me :)
 
RenesmeeCullen
RenesmeeCullen posted a comment
Friday 10th Feb 2012 01:43
********* SPOILER ALERT********* I am sure this is an extract for the seccond book from this series (forbidden), and not from forgiven, as i have already read the second book, its really good, and that is the book were Riley and Beck are in the parking lot with the pyro. and Forbidden is were she finds out what each sphere does and how to use it. her dad died in the first one, he gets awaken by a nucro, then she finds out it was Lucifr who awakend her dad,she goes to becks house, beck storms out cause she had slept with a fallen angel, called ori(he kept saving her life), the Demon hunters come to becks house, she runs to find mortimer, a really nice nucro, he goes out to find lucifer, then when she is in morimers house, her dads body come to see her. the last thing Rileys says is something like "Dad, Im in really big troble". and the ending is all emotional and stuff, but is a realy nice book and ill say it again THIS EXTRACT IS ROM FORBIDEN NOT FORGIVEN!
 
Hattie, MKB Marketing
Hattie, MKB Marketing posted a comment
Friday 10th Feb 2012 02:27
RenesmeeCullen - this is definitely an extract from Forsaken! The extract from Forgiven is here: http://www.mykindabook.com/blogs/2012/2/READ-an-extract-from-Forgiven
 

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